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Rundown


I lie quiescent
in sightlessness,
like a chewing gum
stuck under a shoe.
Without a clue,
but wanting to crawl;
confused…
in blind humiliation.

FYI: This has nothing to do with my state of mind; I am still the same old mad stupid myself! 

26 comments:

Anonymous said...

nothing can get worser than humiliation - any form of it.

Nicely expressed...

But, why such a post amongst super hilarious others?

- shreya

Anonymous said...

Stand up and be counted... Become a nail under the shoe and stop not until you see blood... :-)

Swaram said...

I like the same old mad stupid urself :D

Anonymous said...

Gum! stick to something nicer! Why the shoe!

Cheer-up girl!

G3

Bikramjit said...

hmmmmm humiliation is bad.. the best way to get over it is to face it .. if one is wrong then accpet it and apologise not do ti again

and if not then FACE it and STand Tall and walk strong CHIN UP...

Cheer up

$$ said...

@ Shreya - Thanks!
Was just trying to see if I can sound depressing! :P

@ Anonymous - Yes, that should be the mission! ;)

@ Swaram - :)

@ G3 - i am cheerful as always! :)

@ Bikramjit - yeah! should get over with self confidence! :)

wise donkey said...

well its not easy to get rid of a chewing gum..
yes you managed to convey depression:)

and i liked anon's idea a lot:)

lostworld said...

Analogy to a chewing gum is a first I've come across.. & quite nice :)
Thank God you're still mad & crazy :P

Sjmach said...

Ohhh Thanks for the writing that FYI..

Choco said...

Wow. So different. Loved it!

But. Just in case there is some hint of truth in it- *Huggggs* :)

$$ said...

@ wise donkey - even i liked that! :)

@ lostworld - hehehe, even I am glad that I am still mad and crazy!

@ Sjmach - :)

@ Choco - Love u so much for the *hugs*. Thanks a ton! :)

Tan said...

This is the first time I am seeing an intellectual Shalini :)

R. Ramesh said...

very well written boss..enjoyed reading:)

Meety said...

Ho.. for a moment I was like.. wats with Shal now??? then I read the P.S :-)

$$ said...

@ Tan - except while in the blogosphere, I am always intellectual :P :P

@ R. Ramesh - Thank U :)

@ Meety - hehehe...

twistedglobe said...

http://twistedglobe.blogspot.com/

R. Ramesh said...

shukriya buddy:)

G said...

thankyou for landing on my space .. it has always amazed me to know how people find it at the first place :P
btw, i love your way of writing.looking forward to reading more =)

Prajeshsen said...
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Prajeshsen said...

hai
nice post
congrats
blogil vannthinum vaychathinum thanks

Mayank said...

U sound like a nice traveller's soul.. Keep wanderin n producin such gems :)

$$ said...

@ Ramesh - :) :)

@ G - Thanks! :) I stole a few hours from work and landed on many new blog pages!

@ Prajeshsen - Thanks! Your articles are just too good! :)

@ Mayank - Thanks; how I am flattered! :P :P

Karan Agrawal said...

Some serious thoughts expressed in very logical manner... giving a climax... Good read!

blunt edges said...

Neat. And the FYI at the end kinda made me chuckle! :)

$$ said...

Thanks - Karan & Blunt Edges :)

Anonymous said...

Wow i love the poem; title and the closing line being the best!

but on a personal note, i like u being humorous.

Rgds,
Preeth

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